I've read your pece, and I'm still not getting the connection between gender and climate change. Really climate change will still drown our coastal cities, roast us, or dry up our fresh water supplies regardless of the gender or whoever fetches the water.
If the various summits by nations haven't impressed policy makers of need to address the problem, the poor and downtrodden women fetching water from glaciers aren't going to do so either. I don't think the people living in poor countries (glacial water fetchers etc) and their governments who are living by the bottom line are going to be readily swayed in their actions and expenditures by forces they cannot control or influence.
Nothing these women and their governments do now will change the outcome for glacial melting for many years to come.
To my eyes you might do well writting another piece about gender and Acid Rain, Tornados, or even Gender and Meteor Showers.